Preliminary exercise: Science fiction continuity task

Statement of Intent: I am planning to make a short, minute long, video. It will feature a female student protagonist. The character will be wearing a school uniform as it plays into the plot of an undercover alien/robot carrying out an experiment on a group of students in high school. It will be set on the fire escape of C Block as the school setting adds to the plot. Additionally, the silver colour of the stairs is often connoted with sci-fi. It will only feature a single character as the isolation is intended to create a spooky atmosphere of mystery. The camera will follow the character through a long corridor and down the stairs (fire escape) in order to incorporate match on action. Furthermore, the character will be on the phone and we will only hear one side of the conversation so the audience will receive snippets of a conversation that should help with the enigmatic narrative.

Script:
[Several wide establishing shots of school grounds in various places: Different blocks]
No sound.
[Cut to C Block]
[Low angled shot]
Main character enters scene, echoing footsteps disrupts silence.
Character looks suspicious, keeps looking over shoulder.
[Close up shot/Handheld] [Tense music starts to build tension]
Follows character down corridor, shows fear
[Cut to medium shot]
Walking towards door
[Cut to shot of hand on doorhandle]
[Cut to character walking out door]
[Shots of character on stairs]
Character stops on stairs
[Music quietens]
Character pulls out phone
[Extreme close up of phone]
Dials number (008)
Character: Hello, this is integration unit 3 to Hub. We're already 2 men down. Requesting immediate                    assistance to the left wing of the base. The experiment has failed: they're onto us.
[Dramatic music]
[Flash of light]
[Screen goes black]

Setting: Takes shots of various places in school. Main part takes place in C Block.

Shot List:
1) Establishing/Panning shots-Different blocks
2)Low angled shot-Character walking down corridor
3)Close up-hand held shot of characters face
4)OTS shot-Walking down stairs
5)Extreme close up- Phone
6)Extreme close up-Doorhandle
7)Medium shot-Character pausing on stairs, out of breath
8) Close up- Character talking on phone