October assessment learner response

Marks:21
Grade:6+/7-
WWW: An excellent answer with good use of media terminology for qu 8 and 9
EBI: Develop qu9 by separating into 3x PEE paragraphs.

Q1)0/1---Didn't read the question properly.
Q2)1/1
Q3)2/2
Q4)2/2
Q5)2/2
Q6)2/3---Be more consistent with terminology and references
Q7)2/2
Q8)4/4
Q9)6/8---Use PEE paragraphs//Refer back to the advert more often(specifics)

One of my stronger questions was question 8. I did better on this question because my answers gave full details and I explained it in length.

One of my weaker questions was question 9. This is because I did not structure my questions correctly and I could have added in extra information.

Redraft Question 9:
Charities use images of children as children are more likely to provoke reactions than adults. The producer is aware that children get more sympathy and therefore there will be more of a reaction from consumers(donations.)
The target audience of this poster is adults, preferably those with regular incomes. These people tend to be part of stable families and the producer uses a child in the hopes that the audience will want to help out the child and they will form emotional attachments, leading to regular donations.
The connotations of a young child is happy, lively and playful. In contrast, this child juxtaposes that and he looks miserable and tired. The producer has strategically done this to show that not all children lead happy lives and it makes the consumer more aware of the help that they need to provide.